I'm always open to suggestions. This piece as it is has basically been finished, but I always want to know what people think worked and did not work, what they liked and what they did not like, etc., etc. So, yes, I would love feedback. Even if I don't end up re-writing this I try to incorporate suggestions into the next work. However, it's not like this is heading anywhere, so feel free to do so on your own leisure, or not do so at all if you run out of time. So yes, I'd appreciate anything you care to tell me.
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I'm always open to suggestions. This piece as it is has basically been finished, but I always want to know what people think worked and did not work, what they liked and what they did not like, etc., etc. So, yes, I would love feedback. Even if I don't end up re-writing this I try to incorporate suggestions into the next work. However, it's not like this is heading anywhere, so feel free to do so on your own leisure, or not do so at all if you run out of time. So yes, I'd appreciate anything you care to tell me.